I want to be your sun
But I doubt you hate the shine
I want to be your stream
So we can share our dreams
And that's why I want to be your honey
So that I can love you many
Oh
I want to be your shadow
We won't be apart even when you are on the pillow
I love your smiling face
My heart running without a proper pace
I love when you call me dear
My eyes blink into tears
And that's how you touch me darling
Just with smile and a simple caring
Oh
My heart mellows when you say hello
My heart grows fonder when you are not here
I want to be the air
That you fear to share
I want to complete you
But I doubt I would scare you
I want to love you
But I doubt you just see me through
Oh please
Let me be yours lovely
So you can be my darling
14 December 2008
Note 1: Is there anyone who knows how to compose song? Please do one for me. Hehe. I was imagining a song sounds something like Mocca's.
Note 2: Posted this before in Antologi Dunia. Don't bother to ask. It's a mere poem.
Note 3: I hurt my forearm while finishing this up. It's bleeding still. I hate dizziness.
Tuesday, December 16, 2008
Be My Darling
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I cant try to compose a song, but I'll have to charge :P
Doc yg mempunyai otak art. Bijok!
Eddie:
Art is so dear to me~
emm.. saya rasa saya bukan berbakat dalam itu.
bisanya dlm seni lagu, lagu dicipta dulu, lirik dtg kemudian.
tapi takpe, nanti aku cuba compose satu utk lagu yg sesuai dgn lirik nih. hehe. *mcm pandai*
jiwang dia skrg nih. mungkin faktor kwn2 sekeliling dh berpunya. hehe
atau awk mmg dh jumpa computer geek. :))
oh ye! lirik nih sesuai sgt rentak reggae atau folk. hehe
wah,lirik ni ks yang buat ke? hebat eh.. nini mmg kagum la dgn org yg pndai buat sajak ke,lagu ke.sgt artistic. tak tercapai dek akal nini neh.
huhu,never mind if ur bleeding. u're a doc rite?=)
ilham akan datang bila ade inspirasi..i wonder what is ur inspiration when writing this poem..it seems so sincere :)
Am:
Awak hebat dalam rekacipta. Jauh lebih bergaya bunyinya.
Cikgu Jawe:
Menulis sesuatu yang manis tak beerti jiwang. Housemates saya semua single cikgu. Jadi faktu boleh diabaikan.
Nini:
KS sarcastic =p
Kak Inah:
I myself still wondering. :D
cikgu jawe, not necessarily. Some people like reverse engineering. In this case, lyrics first, music later. I wrote one or two songs from my poem before, so I dont see this as an issue.
Reggae or Folk? I'm guessing it portrays your never ending love for that era.
am >> aku generasi indie le bro. hehe.
ok. abaikan lagu dn lirik. sarah mmg hebat dgn dunianya. :)
kita serah pada yang pakar dan semetsinya ainul tak termasuk dalam list itu.. ^_^
Eddie:
I have 2 songs which I did that way. Lyrics came 1st, then the music followed. Eh, 1 was given to Aniza Idris you know.
Cikgu Jawe:
Untuk Am ke siapa ye?
Ainul:
You're one of them!
sarah!! want to ask u something..salah ke if we want to join christmas lunch? we r not really celebrating it but more to mingle with friends and social nerworking..what do you think? i've been attacked with this issue and some of the people here think i'm too liberal..what do you reckon?
sorry..off topic comment :)
uiks, sejak bilanya ainul terer compose lagu nih? tekaan masa depan ke? hehe.. hurm, kita tunggu dan lihat nanti. mana tau tangan ks ni masin.. haha~ =P
btw, kalau sudah ada yang tolong buat lagu, silalah letak sini tau.. nak dengar komposer dan penulis lyrik baru punya power.. ^_^
Oh awak minat Mocca jugak. Same here... Lyric dia simple tapi best.. I like.
I can write lyrics but someone must help me to compose the melody so that I wont be LOST and get carried away dengan my own melody yang ntah papa. Hehehehe...
P.s: Penulisan awak sama seperti blog Lubna, seorang bakal lawyer yang saya kagumi. Cuma dia menulis di dalam English.. Hm :)
salam....
nanti nak minta tolong chor & k.ngah, cuba reka2 petikan piano utk poem tu...
BTW, chor dah nak main biola pulak...we just need Aniq to play guitar & Anaqi on drum..pas tu bulih buat band 4 genius...hehe..hmmm..x tau la diorang tu...
salam kak sarah...is the poem dedicated to the computer geek?hehehehehe
pandai kak sarah berjiwang...tehehehe
haaaaaaaaaaaaaa...
ngah..
lagu i remember by mocca is my fav..i like that song...so sweet..
as sweet as ur poem...
ngeh33~
Kak Inah:
If it's just a lunch, no such thing like party or bash, why not. Saya berpegang pada pendapat Imam Shafie: Kita meraikan kawan bukan perayaan sebagai tanda penghormatan. Lebih dari tu, saya tak pergi. Kak Inah, can you extract the main idea?
Ainul:
In term of poem-making, you're on the best. Angguk la Ainul. Huhu.
Nono:
Saya tak minat pun Mocca cuma her song apparently suitable for the poem. Eh, that's just my opinion. It may be. And may not be. Lubna? Nak kenal =D Where to find her? Oh. Sure you have it. Nanti saya cari kat sana k.
Abg Fisol:
Ouh. Dah siap boleh buat band lagi tu! The 4 amazing genius ;)
Che Nab:
Eh, cerita2 di FB jangan dibukak kat sini. LOL.
Liyana:
Tapi Yana, Ngah bukannya minat Mocca pun sebenarnya. Just that I personally think her music will sound good for his poem. The professional might not think so. Hehe. Ni namanya tengah perasan sorang =p
Nice poem. Hope to read more of it. You have the talent. Bole auntie buat compilation hasil2 karya sarah?
sweetnya..terasa ceria di hati bila membacanya..:D
blog a.fisol telah berpindah ke http://jejakalkindi.wordpress.com/ from now on...pastikan link di update..hehe..
...everybody need changes from time to time..
Nanny Chomel:
Auntie, mana ada yang menarik pun untuk dikumpul semua ni. Huhu. Lainlah kalau lebih disenikan dengan dideklamasikan ke. Ke auntie nak bacakan sajak ni? Hihi.
Akak:
Akak rasa bunga-bunga? Rasa wardah? *kenyit mata kat Akak*
Abg Fisol:
Alright. Saya dah bookmarked yang ni =)
sj nk mencelah..kak Lubna tu student law kt uia,yeahh mmg hbt dia menulis..dia ada blog kt fs, rsnya x pernah ada yg blogspot rsnya.
saya membayangkan lagu ni dengan beat hip hop pasal kita baca ada rima, yang mana chorusnya kita lagukan saja, mcm menarik, ada potensi jadi lagu sedap, sape mahir sila lagukan, kita mahu dengar nanti.
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